Retsuraed 'I am Pink': Final Part(Well folks, here it is! The final chapter of my Retsuraed of 'I am Pink'. I had a really fun time doing this despite my rather snarky additude torwards it. I hope you've enjoyed this, and I'll leave my full review of the fic down below.)(I am Pink finale: Last chapter genocide syndrome.)This month had been rather uneventful. Tamella was now my mate however and we've had our first offspring.(... HOW? Even if Pink Pikmin reproduce sexually, that should be impossible since in-game it's been proven that Yellow Pikmin are asexual creatures.)Four incredibly smart pink pikmin with yellows roses. I went to work with the other pikmin. The whi
Retsuraed 'I am Pink': Part 3(Okay, half way through this. Not really much to say before we get into the chapter this time. Only thing I can think of is that there's a lot of abuse torwards a certain leafed Red Pikmin in this chapter. I was trying to avoid the 'S' word, but everyone in the comments on where I first posted this figured out who it was suppose to be rather quickly, so I 'f**k it' after a while MSTing this chapter and refer to him by name.)(Chapter four: The worlds quickest war.)Olimar journal:(Captains log, stardate 22413.8.) That pink pikmin... He keeps to himself. Never letting the others in on his burdens... (Of course, I'm not fluent in Pikminese,
Retsuraed 'I am Pink': Part 2(Something I forgot to mention last chapter, this fic was made way back in 2008, long before Pink Pikmin were revealed to actually be in Pikmin 3. As such, as the original title blatantly states, this is a different kind of Pink Pikmin than the ones in the game. Though, not really sure if it would actually have much of an impact on the fic if you view them as the canon Pink Pikmin or not...Sense the next few chapters have no chapter name and number to them, I'm just going to come up with names from now on.Chapter Three: Careful of what you wish for, ya' jerk.)I came out of the hull and was tripped by the same red pikmin from yesterday.
Retsuraed 'I am Pink': Part 1(Hello everyone. My name is TokoWH, and this the first 'Retsuraed' I'm posting to my dA account. For those who don't know, 'Retsuraed'ing is a bit like MSTing, but a key differance is that instead of writing a bunch of OCs making 'witty' comments while watching the original fic play out, I am the one who will be making the 'witty' comments, as well as altering and adding scenes to the fic to make this 'funnier'.Today, I will be MSTing the Pikmin fanfic 'I am Pink' by 'Pikmingirl92'. It's the story of a Pink Pikmin named Haru, the only male in a village of Pink Pikmin who... Oops, almost gave away the plot to the story. That would have been